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I am a spider’s web
I am lace
without support, without substance
that is all I am; that is everything;
I am not free, not ever

You are my frame
You are a foundation
something I cling to and hold
because
without you, I crumble

It is silly to reduce myself to that
when I and you have seen we’re
human, whole, people
or at least the bodies of people
breathing and living
but sometimes I feel like less

This is not a love poem
for those words have not escaped my lips
but without you I feel
like a leaf without a tree
like I may float out to sea and just wait
and nothing will happen, and I will rot
alone
©2009 ~rebeldork
:iconrebeldork:

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:iconestrella-de-la-noche:
This is very nice. Even though it's talking about what you feel like without this person, I think it just shows how very much you care/rely on this person.
Great piece :D

--
People are like stained-glass windows. They sparkle and shine when the sun is out, but when the darkness sets in, their true beauty is revealed only if there is a light from within.
- Elisabeth Kubler-Ross
:iconrebeldork:
Thank you so much.

I really was not expecting to get such a constructive comment less than three minutes after I posted this. I really, really appreciate it. :hug:

--
Und meine Seele spannte
Weit ihre Flügel aus,
Flog durch die stillen Lande,
Als flöge sie nach Haus.

Eichendorff, "Mondnacht"
:iconestrella-de-la-noche:
Hehe, no problem. I love flicking through the "newest" stuff.

--
People are like stained-glass windows. They sparkle and shine when the sun is out, but when the darkness sets in, their true beauty is revealed only if there is a light from within.
- Elisabeth Kubler-Ross
:icon13-15-15-14-10-1:
beautiful I just don't know what to say ^.^

--
-imagination is more important than knowledge-
Einstein
:iconrebeldork:
Thank you so much :hug:

--
Und meine Seele spannte
Weit ihre Flügel aus,
Flog durch die stillen Lande,
Als flöge sie nach Haus.

Eichendorff, "Mondnacht"
:iconvikingjon:
Sometimes we are more intertwined than in our bodies.

Great piece, RD. I love the way you write! Like it comes through you from yesterday and tomorrow, not just today. :clap: :D

--
I went to see your pictures...I spread them across the floor...
So this is where they are shown...Now they're probably saying to you...
If you keep it up you'll be born. --Jane's Addiction
:icon13-15-15-14-10-1:
you are welcome ^.^ :hug:

--
-imagination is more important than knowledge-
Einstein
:iconrebeldork:
Thank you much. :)

--
Und meine Seele spannte
Weit ihre Flügel aus,
Flog durch die stillen Lande,
Als flöge sie nach Haus.

Eichendorff, "Mondnacht"

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